Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux
WELCOME
Hi, everyone. My name is Saf-tea. I'm currently writing and developing my very first visual novel, Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee.
My goal is to provide a dark, story-rich narrative that is blended with some extremely raunchy content. Expect plenty of BDSM, degradation, and other hard kinks.
CONTENT WARNING
Content is only suitable for adults age 18 years and older.
This visual novel is a fictional psycho-erotic story that contains sexually explicit content, dark themes, and disturbing visuals that may unsettle some viewers.
The following themes are mandatory to the story:
Kidnapping
Questionable or Coerced Consent
Psychological Manipulation
Erotic Torture
Manipulation via Fictional Drugs
This novel is designed solely as an artistic exploration of complex psychological dynamics and does not endorse, condone, or glorify sexual violence or any harmful behaviors depicted within the story.
Viewer's discretion is advised.
PLOT
Naomi Blair reigns as the ultimate Queen Bee of Trabuco Hills Academy. Gorgeous, malicious, and untouchable- she spends her school days bullying, harassing, and humiliating any male student or teacher that crosses her path.
However, her world is turned upside down over the winter break when she is suddenly thrust into a twisted, sexually-charged nightmare that she can't escape from.
She is forced to navigate brutal mind games and battle dangerous desires, but will she be able to maintain her pride, dignity, and even sanity by the end?
Prepare to follow Naomi's raw, dark journey into the depths of lust and depravity.
KINKS
Important Note: There will only ever be one male character that engages in sexual activity with our heroine. No NTR, cheating, or prostitution with other men will be written into the story.
Current
- BDSM (Ball Gags, Blindfolds, etc)
- Rope Shibari and Restraints Bondage
- Oral, Vaginal, and Anal Sex
- Cum
- Creampies
- Corruption
- Humiliation
- Degradation
- Cum
- Training
- Ahegao
- Voyeurism
- Spanking
- Masturbation
- Edging
- Sex Toys
- Seriously, excessive amounts of cum...
Future
- More BSDM (nipple clamps, wooden horses, etc)
- Mind Break
- Cosplay
- Pet Play
- Lesbian Sex
- Multiple Penetrations (singular male)
- Paizuri
- Anal Hooks
- Anal Plugs
- Penis Gags
- EVEN MORE AMOUNTS OF CUM
Additionally, this novel dives into some filthy kinks, including:
- Urination/Watersports
- Enema
- Cum Vomiting
- Scat/Coprophagia
Filthy kinks will be COMPLETELY optional and can be turned off at any time in the options menu.
A warning is provided before the start of any filthy content to notify the reader whether they have the content turned on or off.
CURRENT VERSION
ACT I - DEFIANCE
FIRST RELEASE!
- >13,000 Words of Dialogue
- 669 Images
- 35 Custom Animations
- 26 Music Tracks
- 58 Sound Effects
ABOUT SUPPORT
To be honest with you all, this novel is simply a passionate project of mine. The novel will always be free for download and I currently have no plans to set up a Patreon or Subscribestar for monetary support.
The best way to support is to rate the novel and provide feedback!
Download
Install instructions
Extract Zip File and run.
Development log
- Dev Log #3 - Act 2 Progress13 days ago
- Dev Log #2 - Act 2 Progress27 days ago
- Dev Log #1 - Act 2 Progress40 days ago
- First Release: Act 1 - Defiance54 days ago
Comments
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ETA on first update?
Nothing concrete yet, but aiming for end of August/early Sept. Progress has been solid so far.
How are the acts going to work, will you need to transfer your save file over to the new version or are you going to be able to select the act at the main menu, also do decisions transfer from one act to another. (Sorry for asking so many questions at once)
It should be just like an update. So you'd download the new update and put those files in the same place as your current game location. When you load in, the credit screen should have a "Move to Act 2" button, and you'll jump right into the new content. If you haven't reach the credits, the novel will just move from Act 1 to Act 2 automatically.
I'm overhauling the "filthy content" choices to be able to pick individual fetishes. Old save files will get a notice about the change and you'll be able to change it in options menu at any time.
Hope that helps, always happy to answer questions!
Thank you that was really helpful and told me everything I wanted to know.
You should make a Android version.
I'd like to make an Android version but I'm concerned with file size, because I know android has some restrictions on that. I'll see what I can do.
we uh need you to drop all life related events and only focus on this vns development
Oof, you are describing the dream. No-lifing for development as best as I can tho haha.
very clever to build the whole story around the stockholm syndrome, very accurate details about cause and effect mechanisms to twist the subject to new and controled behaviours. Just like in the text books. Cant wait to see more!
interesting story,
however may want to breakdown the different filthy kinks into their own flags.
but look forward to seeing more
Naomi is hot.
Is there no Android version available
I didn't create one but someone created an unofficial port found on f95zone website. I can't link it directly but if you find the Naomi thread there, it's in the comments section.
I really like this type of game. Can we add more content about feet
I hope to add a Chinese translation
Maybe add a feature to name the teach instead of just call him Teach?
Patreon?
Nothing at the moment. I may consider setting one up before the next release if people really want to support me monetarily. A review showing people like the novel is more than enough for me though!
Maybe consider a bit more nipple teasing in future - have Teach use it a again to arouse her, but have his own enjoyment too, and twist Naomi's nips, even suck and bite on them? Get her totally wet with it, perhaps. :)
Nip play is definitely on the board :)
Loved it so far. Would have preferred Lexi over Naomi, though. I'm hoping we get some content with her when / if she looks for Naomi.
While not as prominent as Naomi, I promise Lexi will play a key role in the story.
I just found your game and you instantly won me over. The writing is so good, the characters are great and it's just a very hot scenario over all. I am looking forward to the second part!
Glad you enjoyed it!
is there squirting
Absolutely. I think one scene in particular you'll really like and I'll only get better at depicting it.
Pregnancy
Hi Nicusorul, while I love me some pregnancy content, I can't promise I'll be able to fit it into this particular script.
No prob i just sugest somthing
Maybe pregnancy risk instead? Have Naomi at a 'risky' point when she finally concedes to sex with Teach, and the wonton taboo of possibly getting pregnant makes her go even more crazy with lust?
That's an interesting idea, will simmer on it!
In terms of visual novels, this is a new style, and it's still pretty good, waiting for next updates.